I think it would be bettter if your limerick had the word "odd" instead of the word "weird" in the last sentence. Other than that your limerick was good.
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I think it would have made better sense if you wouldnt have put the last sentence
Yours was good. I AGREE with sam, odd would have been better than wierd.
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I think it would be bettter if your limerick had the word "odd" instead of the word "weird" in the last sentence. Other than that your limerick was good.
anybody there?
I think it would have made better sense if you wouldnt have put the last sentence
Yours was good. I AGREE with sam, odd would have been better than wierd.
Hey Sally this is jennifer moore can we be friends?
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