Wednesday, September 26, 2007

My Limerick

There once was a cat named Pat.
He would always sleep on a mat.
He had a ton of fur,
And his water was never pure.
This wierd cat even had a toy bat!

5 comments:

Sam Morgan said...

I think it would be bettter if your limerick had the word "odd" instead of the word "weird" in the last sentence. Other than that your limerick was good.

hugo-nobrains said...

anybody there?

superscarysavana said...

I think it would have made better sense if you wouldnt have put the last sentence

sceja_89 said...

Yours was good. I AGREE with sam, odd would have been better than wierd.

oreo said...

Hey Sally this is jennifer moore can we be friends?